Wednesday 29 February 2012

Feedback from Teacher- Improvements:

From the teachers feedback there were positives and negatives to take away from the advice, and some of the advice I had noted myself as advice to further develop the advert.
10 Second Adverts Improvements:


Need to have a new shot after this of the Logo, rather than having the logo on this shot as it isn’t noticeable enough.
Also the Voiceover at the end will need to be louder over the music in the background.


Remove the lettering on the background image, isn’t consistent and is not needed.
Again have the same ending as the other sponsorship sequence, with the logo at the end as a recurring element of the brand identity.


Also states who the Advert sponsorship sequence is sponsoring at the end of the advert.

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