Wednesday 29 February 2012

Feedback from Teacher- Further Improvements :

Theses were the improvments I will have to make to my 30 seconds adverts of how to further develop them, I will be making these changes gradually evaulating the process as I go.

30 Second Adverts Improvements:


Like the other sponsor sequences, Remove the lettering on the background image, isn’t consistent and is not needed.



Any further close up shots to add variety in the advert would increase the selection of the shots used, making it more visually attractive.

Remove the shots of the Indian scene from the advert entirely, as the first advert with revolve around music.

Again, similarly to the sponsorship adverts, the last shot should be the logo with the brand name and the slogan.

Positive feedback enjoyed this element of the 2nd advert, with the repetition of the shot length.




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